Tuesday, December 7, 2010
A Speed Fiend
Epitaph
Be forewarned
On the road I was way in front
I weaved in and out of traffic
Get out of my way!
I was the fastest,
a speed hero once before
(140 characters)
Inspired by Micro Fiction # 60
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17 comments:
Dear Hank,
That's beautiful one and most appropriate for those who treat the roads as a racing track.
Dear Hal,
Thanks. Try Stony's Micro Fiction (see my last comment in ur blog)
Hank,
A warning contained within your words.
Necessary everywhere these days!
Eileen:)
Hank,
Sorry, you have progressed too far and I am out of my depth!
Happy maal Hijrah
Excellent take on this week's Microfiction! And a warning to all speed demons out there.
Have a great week. Cheers!
Be warned eh?
Succinct and to the point.
I loved the title then I saw epitaph I knew this would be good. I see drivers like this every day they are scary! great writing!
Eileen,
Absolutely and invariably they are young ones.
Pakcik,
Thanks and Happy Maal Hijrah to you too!
Sylvia,
Thanks Ma'am. An excellent week to you too!
Akelamalu,
Thanks, so it is!
Amanda,
Scary yes, and they are just teens!
Akhi Hank.
Brings a smile at first then a frown of self consciousness and self-guilt, hehehe.
Hah!
This should be in our papers and TV ads. Straight on! Head on! Bang!
Ah yes, too many speed heroes end up where this one did... The epitaph is hopefully a warning to some. Well done, this micro tale.
Akhi Norzah,
So it is, Cheers!
Dear Ninot Ma'am,
Yes, they never seem to learn,care nor fear. And they are young. Pity.
Rudy,
thanks for the visit
Dear Sir Hank,
I want to share this amazing Poetry In motion with you.
http://poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.com/2010/12/inspirational-gregory-colbert.html
And some good news:
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/moondustwriters-thursday-featuring-more.html
Ninot Ma'am,
Went in and commented. Thanks!
smart one...
Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Sunday!
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