The Attic
It’s creepy. It’s eerie
It’s full of knick knacks
Throwaways most of them
Auntie Jane was such a darling
‘none to be disposed of, you hear me’?
Was it an order or a desperate plea
Never had the chance to know for sure
She passed on and nobody dared
and nobody tried
The old tennis racket, its guts snapped
The broken frame stood its ground
Uncle Joe’s tool box, atop his soiled overalls, smeared
Nothing’s changed, nothing’s disturbed
John, had not ventured in for decades
He did not want to be surprised at finding something weird
Alice his sister though closer to their mother was all jitters talking about it
‘I want to see what’s in there but dear mother stopped us’
Was it a mere excuse or was it untold fright
Heard say there were skeletons inside
Long ago Uncle Joe’s farm-hand, Jack , apparently defied the odds
The moment he stepped in he threw up gave a loud squeal and dead he dropped
Thereafter, no one dared venture in
It was left, dark, drab, and cold within
But I’m one not fearful of ghosts though , I’m just curious
What’s inside I must see, yes , the day is today
Not a second longer, it is now
‘Hear ye apparitions, I’m coming in, I’ve made a vow
Neither hell, fire nor high water is going to stop me’
I’ve made up my mind come what may
This is it, I’m slowly making my way,
Up the rickety steps, of old wooden planks
That creaked under my weight
I’m now at the door, I dusted the knob
turned it, nothing happened
Needs another stronger twist I imagine
Stronger this time and,
‘ Wham!’
All hell broke loose.
‘Who wrenched away at the door, huh?’
That’s awfully rude of you
Okay, you’re back from your graveyard shift
But have some consideration, please!
I was on to something
But you startled me from sleep
It could have developed into an interesting dream!
Submitted for Willow's Magpie 41 and Jingle's Poetry Potluck - Magic & Miracles
28 comments:
I didn't expect the turn you took! :o)
So was the whole construct a dream? Was there ever an Auntie Jane? You are so cruel!
Mary, I didn't expect it myself. As things developed somehow it went that direction.
Stafford Sir, You have a tendency to make witty comments, a different stance from others. I like it. Thanks buddy!
OMG the ending.... I was getting ready for the worst the BAM! Oh that was great fun!
Stafford is always so much fun, his blog too.
That was why he was the only blogger date chosen to the cyber event Willow Ball this year amidst all the movie stars, dead and alive!
I'll be waiting for the 'lost touch' to come back. Auntie Jane's attic for inspiration?
BTW, that's how dreams are - they sort of meander here and there in unexpected directions!
you have beautiful imaginations.
Amanda Ma'am,
Nice of you to drop by! Thanks.
Ninot Ma'am,
Stafford is great. Been following his blog. Yes, Ma'am the lost touch is a challenge. A less eerie one for inspiration. Being a 'seni' person you let out 'discoveries' for others, appreciate that. 'dreams are made of these'- Boy George
Jingle,
Thanks for the visit!
That always happens in dreams - just when you're really getting down to the nitty gritty either someone wakes you up or the alarm goes off. Nice read!
thanks Bee, absolutely!
Love to see come what may, within the worlds of our dreams... a definite surprise tho.
Petrina Ma'am,
It would be fun. Tho' it has been said dreams are reflections of the sub-conscious.
Don't you love when you can drift back into a dream and take up where you left off? It happens to me, but only rarely. Nice write.
Beautiful poem..never expected such an ending..
Willow,
Yes, It did happen. You may be able to influence it but only just. It would drift away again in no time.
Rashmi,
Thanks for dropping by.
the dream wa sscaryyyy :D
loved it :D
An excellent expression of the realism of dreams, I dream vividly and often, I am so relieved I wake before they reach their end. Well done.
Anita.
This is so well executed. Love it.
Raj,Aquarius,Julie
Sometimes we make it to end fast, especially the horror ones. Thank you all.
Thanks for beaming potluck with a piece of your fine art.
rich and beautiful content,
enjoyed your style.
lol! I loved it! Wasn't prepared for the ending - I really thought the ghost was waiting! :)
Talon Ma'am,
Thanks. Returned your visit. Admired your lovely pics and poem in one posting every time.
Kaukuala
Very interesting and great ending... I enjoyed reading it...
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Shashi,
Thanks for the visit. Seen your blog, very informative.
week 11 potluck awards/treats 4 u
Thanks for the beautiful contribution to week 11, hope to see you next Monday!
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