Rudolph
No more Red-nosed
Nor running nor jumping
Only just NF, Not Falling!
That's all
Just stuck to the wall
It took
Just one fatal mistake!
Inspired by Susan's MicroFiction Monday # 58
Monday, November 22, 2010
A Fatal Mistake
Rudolph
No more Red-nosed
Nor running nor jumping
Only just NF, Not Falling!
That's all
Just stuck to the wall
It took
Just one fatal mistake!
Inspired by Susan's MicroFiction Monday # 58
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A morality tale--I love it. My limerick is also a morality tale. So sad...the sometimes fatal mistakes of youth.
So sad, no more running or jumping. I know just how he feels.
Good one.
-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
A sad little limerick.
Very very nice!
Ah, yes! The mistakes of youth!! Know just how he feels -- well, when I can actually remember those way back then!!! Have a great week!
Sylvia
Yep, just one... Nice!
So wise and so true! Great stuff!
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Oh no! Not the slip and fall!
Pat,
Yes, youth often learn the hard way.
Kay,
It's a lonely guy who upsets the apple-cart.
Peggy,
Thanks for dropping by.
Sylvia,
Yes, The youths have their ups and downs. Wishing a great week for you too!
Hank
Susan and Gaelikaa,
Thanks for the visit
Hank
Petrina,
The folly of youth, a sad story.
Hank
Good advice from a deer who knows. Good one.
Poor Rudolph. If he'd only listened to his mom...so I tell my teens
good one
NF - not falling, I like that
Oh, the humanity! (<--But waaay funny!) What ever will Santy Claus do if it's foggy, come Christmas? LOL!
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*
Love it plain and simple love it...
Hahahaha! Perfect!
So THAT'S what NF stands for...I had wondered about it and now I know. Thanks so much...lol
Have a great week. Cheers!
I loved your take on this! Poor guy!
How sad. But made a cute little limerick.
Yup, that's how it goes sometimes. Poor guy! :O)
Hold on Rudolph! What a great microfiction today.
Lisa,SLMom,Diane,
Mom deer knows best, Thanks!
Sparkle,
Santa goin to use his GPS, I'm sure!
Sylvia,
It could've been Not Female, Nothing Fancy or Next Fall we meet again!
Stoic, Mary,Talon,Gigi,Diane,SMom
Thanks, and sure bet will return your visits.
Dear Sir Hanks,
This was fun!
Just to let you know, I will be out of the loop these few months (though I will be browsing through the poets blogsphere)
I have just strated my new book - LEGENDS - From The Makyung, and the research and writing is taking up a lot of my spare time.
Do continue your fine poetry and do visit my blog from time to time!
Dear Ninot Ma'am,
It's good you're on to something big. The poetry scene is always there for you to make encroachments. We'll miss you but you've a job to do. I admire your resolve. It's good you'll still be making your presence felt as and when. With every best wishes for your new venture.
Ah! Sometimes it pays to be extra careful!
How true it is , Wow!
Oh gosh I cracked up reading this! NF! Loved it!
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