Hombre
waiting for the right move
your breed is fierce
a fighter no less
lethal
Do we see one
fighting for justice
on the side of the law?
Submitted for Susan's Microfiction Monday's # 57
Hombre
waiting for the right move
your breed is fierce
a fighter no less
lethal
Do we see one
fighting for justice
on the side of the law?
Submitted for Susan's Microfiction Monday's # 57
23 comments:
Great take on the picture!
That's the question good against evil. I want to find out who wins in the end! Very nice.
very interesting micro!
Nice take. Very good question.
Thank you for visiting my blog and commenting. Visitors who comment are always welcome.
And I think my bit of history about Coronel Esteban Cantu would answer your question. He was a good man.
-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
I really like the good against evil theme! Now, let's hope the good guy wins -- doesn't happen that often, unfortunately! Great take on the pic of the day! Enjoy your week!
Sylvia
Glad for those justice fighters! :O)
You paint a picture with your words, even without a picture to look at! Excellent poetic take on this week's MM!
Intriguing microfiction. Love the question you raised.
Isn't that always the age-old debate...good versus evil...loved your post this week.
Cheers!
I like this one a lot!
Yes, thank you all. It is the simple but powerful age-old yin and yang, good and bad, right and wrong stance again! Thanks for dropping by.
the light has it every time ~
great take
have a great week
Lib
Yes, it did Kay. Your blog is real versatile. Covers large grounds and have great pictures. Thanks for returning the visit.
Dear Sir Hanks,
My wireless router is out. Both laptop cables 'koyak'. Time to do something about the home office.
Result, I am a bit out of the loop.
Your poem is tight, provokes questions and old age battle between right and wrong.
Nice MFM!
Note : the limit on 140 characters really help discipline us in choosing the right words carefully. That's what I love about Susan's MFMs. And Susan is a first class fighter too.
BTW, where is your Picasso treat? I loved seeing it everytime I log on to Birdhouse!
Some hombre you painted here, Kay. I like him being on the side of the law.
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smart take on the prompt...
Glad to see you showcase so many talents.
you deserve another chance, we deserve another chance,
I invite you to link in a poem today,
we are open 24 hours from now.
Thanks for the support.
Happy Tuesday!
your talent rocks.
xx
thought provoking piece.
That was different. i liked it.
Is there a sequel? :)
Dear Ninotaziz Ma'am,
Welcome back. I thought it strange not to see you around. Hope you had it fixed. Agreed, MF is a 'must visit'
Is there a sequel? Yes, I think it should. Afterall it was 'A Few Dollars More, 'A Fistful of Dollars' and followed with many others.
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